Sunday, December 03, 2006

Nearly Full

chopready

Nearly Full

Believing in words to come out right
I string along again tonight
Body motions under a moon bright sky
Ripple clouds watch me stumble dance
Particular about a serious direction
Why I take my circles always given
Where I touch the ground
With all that covers it and it covers
Light steps and a lighter shadow
Believe the words for stride or walk
Can move with written talk again
Tonight where the moon is out

JM

5 comments:

Jackson said...

I found this great guide to writing via t.s. elliot's Quartets

http://evidenceanecdotal.blogspot.com/2006/12/beautiful-things-are-rare.html


have a look , I think you'll appreciate the short read and may have some thoughts. It inspired me.

Anonymous said...

View my complete profile:

I still like the one that goes like this:

About Me

high school dropout went to groovy alt. school where we could smoke. Yes I'm that old smoking was legal. Started poming shortly after joining subversive charity org. Been a const. wkr., bookseller janitor,warehouse wkr,sub maker,organizer,icemaker,more musician,poet?,merrymaker. I like to think I have a keen sense of humor. I come from a large family and we had many creative ways to make each other laugh. I like the sun. I finally realized this was easier after much wasted time shaking my fist and bitterly complaining. The moon is also my friend now as I could not stop it's constant "phasing". As it goes I have accepted many elements of my environ- ment, even came to terms with trees, grass, and some people. I won't go as far as accepting social planning. Oh wait, that's actually a good idea as long as it does not bleed into people planning like eugenics or such. I have learned to embrace my ignorance and consider it a great source of learning.

Anonymous said...

How did

yasu

post to pomegranite

??

chopready said...

Hey Anon, Leave a first name or something. Yasu? eh?

Anonymous said...

. . . or something:

How's this?

Hope all goes well in Des Moines this week.